Comments on: Crushing those narrative dreams

By: The one that's not me

The one that's not me — Sat, 06 Aug 2011 13:13:42 +0000

I just love, love, LOVE Ben’s “pop!”-face…

By: Hatter

Hatter — Tue, 26 Jan 2010 05:00:53 +0000

thanks 8D

By: Cat

Cat — Fri, 22 Jan 2010 16:32:29 +0000

So recently, I was showing my boyfriend this comic and I showed him page one and then the most current page (previous update). I was amazed at how far your artwork has gone since starting this comic. Honestly, with every page you seem to advance your talent a little bit more. I just wanted to compliment you on your achievements here at Dovecote because they are definitely worth complimenting. :)

And thank you both for continuing to give us this comic every week. It is among my very very top favourites. I honestly adore it and cannot wait for the next update. :)

By: Cat

Cat — Fri, 22 Jan 2010 16:28:53 +0000

Is there really any doubt about that?

By: wandering-dreamer

wandering-dreamer — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 22:17:51 +0000

Poor Ben, you’re too genre savvy for your own good.

By: Seanan

Seanan — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 20:53:46 +0000

Haha, I love how he just pops out, kinda like the kid who gets locked in the library for a night… Ben is definitely my favorite.

By: max

max — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 19:53:06 +0000

*Pop* – Ben strikes again! He truely is master of stealth!
I love Charlys pose in panel 2, there are definitely not enough wide shots in most webcomics.
Your work with angles and persepctive is really cool, Ben going up the stairs and drawing breath in front of the door has nice Blairwitchy handheld feeling.

By: Wynne

Wynne — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 16:55:14 +0000

*pop!*

That sound effect needs to happen more when characters suddenly appear from behind stuff.

Of course, Ben’s reaction to seeing nothing is the perfect cue for the ghost to suddenly materialize behind him. Cue creepy music!

By: Meg

Meg — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 15:41:43 +0000

I keep imagining Ben making up a sneaky ninja theme song in his head as he ascends those stairs.

By: Elwen

Elwen — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 13:13:06 +0000

Yay! Awesome narrative :D